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Student Writer: Isabella Gionfriddo

This third grader truly demonstrates what she has learned about adding detail to her writing.

This week’s featured writer: Isabella Gionfriddo

 School: St. Stanislaus School

Age: 8

Grade: 3

Teacher: Mrs. Nagel

What have you learned in school that makes you a better writer? I have learned how to put my creative thoughts into a story and use a lot of detail.

What is your favorite book? Sleuth or Dare, Partners In Crime

What do you like to do outside of school? Dance, Rollerblade, Play Basketball, Read

Isabella’s writing:

Winter Woman

Winter Woman is tall and wonderful.  She has light blue skin and dark blue hair.  She has a long aqua colored dress with a crystal crown.  She has pointy ears and big blue wings.  She has a wand with a big white snowflake at the top and has long silver streaks that shine in her hair like tinsel.

One day, Winter Woman was laying in her ice cold bed with her puppy, Snowball.  Then her big red alarm went off and that meant that there was a problem somewhere.  She went outside of her igloo house and saw people running everywhere.  It was a snow monster!  She raced as fast as she could towards the snow monster, took out her wand and spun it around in the air and …zap!  She destroyed the snow monster!  The mayor gave her a big crystal trophy and she became the biggest hero ever.

 

 

 

 

 

James Mellor March 14, 2012 at 02:08 AM
Bella- Nana and Papa are so proud of you!!! I'm thinking of dying my hair blue in honor of your first published story!!! Keep writing about Winter Womans' adventures. I can't wait to read more! Love Nana &Papa xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
AJ Dugal March 14, 2012 at 02:14 PM
Lovely story, great imagination. Good job Isabella. Love, Uncle AJ
Pat Tower March 14, 2012 at 08:11 PM
Bella - I think your story is very creative and loved reading it. Your imagination is extraordinary! I hope your story continues and look forward to reading more. I love you always. Grandma Pat.
Annie b. April 07, 2012 at 10:46 PM
You rock Bella.
Annie b. April 07, 2012 at 10:47 PM
Isabella is so creative

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